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Poetic Justice, Just for Hell

by Joan Crespi

Raves for hell? That’s what the new English translation

of Dante’s "Inferno" by Dante scholar Robert Hollander and

his wife, Jean Hollander, a poet, is garnering. Jeffrey Hart, National

Review’s senior editor, says the translation "has so many

strengths

that it is certain to become the translation for our time." Others

have called it the "most accurate, most readable translation in

decades." Amazon.com readers have awarded it five stars, saying

the translation "combines the virtues of maximum readability with

complete fidelity to the original Italian and to Dante’s intentions

and subtle shadings of meaning." In independent bookstores, it

is often a staff selection.

The Hollanders’ English free verse translation of the

"Inferno,"

the first part of "The Divine Comedy" (their translations

of the two other sections, "Purgatorio" and "Paradiso"

are forthcoming), was published by Doubleday in December, in a first

printing of some 25,000 copies. In February the translation —

the original Italian and the English translation are printed on facing

pages — was selling so well that the publishers proceeded with

a second printing.

Poet Jean Hollander is also a teacher and director of the College

of New Jersey’s annual Writers’ Conference, a day of workshops,

readings,

panels with literary agents, editors, and noted authors. This year

the conference takes place on Wednesday, April 18, and this year Jean

Hollander, herself, will be among the noted authors giving readings.

She will read from "Dante’s `Inferno:’ a Verse Translation"

as well as from her own prize-winning collection of poems,

"Moondog."

"The Divine Comedy" has given Dante a place among the greatest

poets of the Western literary canon (he even put himself alongside

the greats in the "Inferno’s" fourth canto). Countless

commentators

have written on the work; there’s long been a cult of Dante, which

Robert Hollander and his Princeton students continue.

The "Commedia," as Dante called it, has 100 cantos in three

nearly equal parts of 33 cantos each, except for "Inferno,"

which has 34. Robert Hollander believes that "Inferno" was

essentially completed during the first decade of the 14th century.

The poem was an immediate success and has been esteemed throughout

most of the succeeding centuries. (Voltaire and Walpole both derided

Dante, however, and his reputation reached its nadir in the 18th

century.)

There are about 10 English translations of part or all of "The

Divine Comedy" currently available (perhaps there are over 100

in history). Many are prose translations, and poets from Longfellow

to John Ciardi to W.S. Merwin to Robert Pinsky have published their

own translations

Why retranslate the classics at all, when there are

so many translations?

The Hollanders, a unique team comprising a Dante scholar and a poet,

have provided a translation offering maximum fidelity to Dante’s text

plus a contemporary poetic resonance. Although they say they began

the translation only for themselves, their work is expected to bring

hefty profits over the years, to authors and publisher alike, as the

paperback edition could sell to several generations of college

students.

Add to this sales to those who had read the poem in college but lacked

the worldly understanding to appreciate it fully. (I was such a

student.)

Such adults, with an excellent translation at hand, would do well

to try again, suggests Gerald Howard, executive editor at Doubleday.

And — have been rewarded by such an experience myself — I

second his suggestion.

Here Dante reads like a fierce, horrifying, hideous travelogue. It

is highly imaginative — full of intrigue, murder, blood, betrayal,

fire, giants, shrieks, smells, scabs, gnawings, clawings, and hideous

punishments — as Dante assures the reader of the truth of what

he has seen. Add borrowings, or at least ideas, from Roman poets Ovid,

Lucan, and of course Virgil, who is Dante’s travel guide in this

singular

walking tour through hell. While all are dead but Dante, and all are

shades and weightless, they do feel pain. There’s humor, albeit grim,

in "Inferno," too, as Robert Hollander notes.

Beyond professional critics, scholars and poets alike are praising

the translation. Says Richard Lansing, professor of Italian and

Comparative

Literature at Brandeis University: "the translation wonderfully

captures the concision, directness, and pungency of Dante’s

style."

Fellow translator and Princeton professor Robert Fagles (with

acclaimed

translations of Homer’s "Iliad" and "Odyssey") hails

it as "a distinguished act of poetry and scholarship." And

poet Alicia Ostriker calls it "a brisk, vivid, readable, and

scrupulously

subtle translation, coupled with excellent notes and commentary. Every

lover of Dante in English should have this volume."

Beyond the notes, scholars and students can appreciate the flow of

lines, for Robert Hollander’s extensive notes do not interrupt the

text at the bottom of each page but follow each canto. Students will

find the outlines of each canto preceeding the canto helpful, plus,

at the beginning of the book, there’s a geographic map of Dante’s

Hell, with its four concentric rivers, and on the facing page, an

outline of hell, its sins, rivers, and monsters. Untutored readers

of Dante will also find essential the notes on the various political

and religious figures in the poem. Dante’s hell is stocked with

renowned

Greeks and Romans, imaginary characters from mythology, and many

figures

in world and especially then-recent Italian history. Dante placed

his enemies in "Inferno," sending them to eternal damnation;

hell also holds Dante’s beloved teacher among the homosexuals.

Dante called his work a comedy because it was not written in the

"tragic"

Latin but in the "low" vernacular, and because it had a

"happy

ending." "Divine" was added to the title in 1555 by a

Venetian printer. (The poem was dealing with a sacred subject and

was considered a work of genius.) Dante wrote the poem in terza rima

(aba,bcb,cdc, etc.) using the cosmology of Thomas Aquinas. It is a

political poem as well as a poem of graphic Christian imagination.

But it is no whitewash: hell holds avaricious clerics, popes, and

cardinals.

The progress of hell (if one may say that) is in concentric,

ever-smaller

circles descending into earth, from where the least to the worst sins

are punished. Considered the lesser sins and put in the outer circles,

are sins of incontinence (lust, gluttony, avarice and prodigality,

anger and sullenness, heresy). Then begin various sins of violence

(circle 7), sins of simple fraud (circle 8), and finally, on the

frozen

floor of hell (circle 9), treachery.

Dante and the reader find the lovers Paolo and Francesca in Circle

2; Count Ugolino and his four children starving to death in Circle

9. Does he eat his dead children? Some critics say that, Jean

Hollander

reports in a recent telephone interview. But she doesn’t think so.

Are we to feel sympathy and pity for the sinners (as the character

Dante often does)? Or are their punishments from God and so are just?

Their words are self-presenting and should be read from an ironic

viewpoint, Robert Hollander believes. The Hollanders would rather

be considered medieval moralizers than romantics, Jean says.

Robert Hollander’s origin intention was to reproduce

the 1939 John D. Sinclair English translation (in poetic prose) for

a large online Dante project he was preparing. He planned to simply

clean up "thee" and "thou" and other outdated usages.

Then he discovered a later translator, Charles Singleton, had done

just that in 1970. There were other known considerations as well.

And one unknown: Jean Hollander.

The collaboration, in fact, came about quite by accident. Jean

Hollander

happened to look over her husband’s shoulder on day in February, 1997,

when the two were in an apartment in Florence, Italy. Robert sat at

the computer, a portion of the re-worked Sinclair translation on

screen.

She read the words she saw and told him, "It’s awful! horrible!

It’s unsayable!"

"Can you do better?" he asked.

Jean, who reads Italian, took the translation and two days later came

back with a poetic translation of Canto I that he liked enough to

ask her, "Are you willing to spend five years of your life on

this?"

The answer is the new translation.

The work of translation began in the apartment in Florence with a

terrace overlooking the Duomo, Jean says in the phone interview.

"To

have that while you’re translating this Florentine poet, it was a

thrill!"

The collaboration did not proceed smoothly. The Hollanders had

"occasional

shouting matches," says Robert. He was responsible for accuracy,

she for sound, but they’d invade each other’s turf.

"You call yourself a poet?" he demanded in one argument.

"That

line limps!" And she retorted, "You call yourself a scholar?

And you’re standing behind such a ridiculous interpretation as

that?"

When Jean complained that Robert was winning most of the arguments,

they decided to keep score.

"We each won about half," Robert told an audience at a reading

at the Princeton U-Store in February. Jean shook her head and took

the microphone "It was my idea," she said, gently triumphant.

"Then I won more."

Often they would argue over one word. In one instance they argued

over whether the word should be "down," which Jean wanted,

or "below, which Robert wanted. "Doownn," with Jean lingering

in the U-store reading over the sonorous "o" and holding the

clipped "n," won. (. "…and then are hurled down."

Canto V, l. 15)

Some feuds may linger unto death. In another instance

they fought over whether the word should be "bugle" (Robert)

or "trumpet" (Jean) in the line "He made a bugle/trumpet

of his asshole." (Canto XXI, 1.139). "Since the word is

`trombetta’

in Italian, Jean won that one," Robert told his audience. "But

if Jean goes first, it’s `bugle’." (Robert wrote the notes: it’s

`bugle’ in the notes.)

The arguments, when public, turned heads. "We would argue for

hours at a time as if it were something important," Robert

Hollander

said gently, "but it was important to us."

Asked at the U-Store if the Hollanders would continue to collaborate

if they got divorced, Robert thought a moment, searched the air, then

said, "Yes, I think so." Jean Hollander stepped quickly up

to the microphone and declared, "Absolutely not! Then I couldn’t

threaten to leave him!"

The work went on, away from Florence for a few years. Jean likes to

write, put a work aside for a time, then read it as if for the first

time. She says she can catch alot of flaws that way.

"Also, it’s good to have two people," she says. "Most

translators work alone, but we criticize each other. When one ear

goes wrong, the other one hears."

"Of course," she adds, "with only one, there are fewer

arguments."

There were numerous drafts. "We kept going over it and over it

and improving it, we hope. We worked separately and together, then

separately and together."

Did the work get easier as the Hollanders progressed?

"At the beginning," says Jean, "it is just terribly hard

work. As the drafts go by, it gets easier and more enjoyable."

The three years’ work of translation was finally finished in February,

2000, on the beach at Tortola. Now, says Jean in the phone interview,

"most of the Sinclair is completely altered."

In the "Inferno," Dante, at age 35 (midway to the Biblical

70), finds himself, or comes to himself, (the Hollanders stress

"comes

to himself" for its sense of sudden surprise) in the a dark wood

either on Good Friday, in April, 1300, or in March. Dante sometimes

alters facts to suit his purposes. (The year is certain for the poem

mentions the Jubilee Year.)

The Hollanders’ translation begins:

Midway in the journey of our life

I came to myself in a dark wood,

For the straight way was lost.

(Canto I, l. 1-3)

As Jean Hollander told one audience, "We hope that we have

kept the sense of the original in modern English, as well as at least

some of its feeling . . . We find that the loss that occurs in finding

rhymes so forces the sense that it is better to surrender on that

front and try to be most faithful to the shadings of sense in the

original."

The Hollanders met when both were graduate students

at Columbia. They have been married 36 years.

Robert Hollander is a graduate of Princeton and Columbia (three

generations

of Hollanders went to Princeton: Robert, his father, and his son).

Robert is a professor at Princeton where has taught Dante’s

"Divine

Comedy" for 39 years. He is a member of the university’s

Department

of Romance Languages and Literatures, former chairman of its

Department

of Comparative Literature, and the author of 23 books and 80 articles

on Dante, Boccaccio, and others. Among his many awards is the Gold

Medal of the city of Florence in recognition of his Dante scholarship.

Jean Hollander was born in Vienna, lived in Cuba for a year as a

child,

and was raised in New York City. She is an award-winning poet for

her first book of poems, "Crushed into Honey." Another

collection

of her poetry, "Moondog," was a prize-winner in the Quarterly

Review of Literature Poetry Book Series. Her poetry has appeared in

more than a hundred literary journals. She has taught literature at

Brooklyn College, Columbia, the College of New Jersey, and Princeton.

Recently she has been teaching poetry writing. The couple lives in

Hopewell. They are the parents of two adult children, a son and a

daughter.

Dante Alighieri was born in 1265, in Florence, where he grew up and

lived there until his perpetual banishment for political reasons in

1302. Return and he’d be burnt alive. (He was a Guelph, active in

the Guelph-Ghibilline strife.) He was the first major author to write

in Italian.

Dante met his idealized beloved, Beatrice, when he was nine; their

second meeting was nine years later, and she died in 1290 at 25.

Although

he married and had three (or four) children with Gemma Donati, it

is Beatrice who provides the inspiration for his poetry, Beatrice

who enlists Virgil to be his guide, Beatrice (and not Virgil) who

can usher him through Paradise. Dante completed the entire

"Commedia"

shortly before his death in 1321. Well short of 70.

(Beatrice was of the Portinari family. The last time the Hollanders

were in Florence, they rented a villa above Florence built by the

Portinari family, but Beatrice didn’t live there. It was built some

50 years after she died.)

Just as Virgil tells Dante in Canto VIII, "I will not forsake

you in the nether world," so Jean and Robert Hollander are not

leaving the reader in hell. Although the three sections are of roughly

equal length, the publishers have allotted three, then two, then one

year for each section. The Hollanders’ translation of

"Purgatorio,"

which they are still refining, is scheduled to be out in 2002.

Have they kept score? "Not yet," says Jean. "But we

haven’t

had our final arguments yet." "Purgatorio" is obviously

going faster than "Inferno." "We have gotten more used

to the work," Jean says. "In `Inferno’ Dante uses many

different

voices. `Purgatorio’ just flows easier, it has a more consistent

rhythm

— most of the time. It’s more poetic."

They’re working differently, too. On "Inferno" Robert

translated

the cantos first; with "Purgatorio" each is translating some

of the cantos first. Their translation of "Paradiso" arrives

in 2003.

College of New Jersey Writers’ Conference, Student Center

and Kendall Hall, 609-771-3254. The 20th annual conference features

a full day of workshops on publishing fiction and nonfiction, writing,

screenwriting, and poetry, led by a guest faculty of more than 15

professional authors. Featured readings by celebrity guest authors

Sonia Sanchez at 4:30 p.m., and Spike Lee at 8 p.m. Preregister, $10

to $80. Wednesday, April 18, 9 a.m.

Jean Hollander, director of the writers’ conference, will

read at 2:30 p.m.


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